tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6793096211167766623.post1840470468349025393..comments2013-04-09T06:33:19.370-07:00Comments on TuTh 1110 Writing to Learn and Connect: Anthony FernandezMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6793096211167766623.post-16459309121471802682013-01-16T14:07:25.263-08:002013-01-16T14:07:25.263-08:00Good lord this is a great poem! After reading the ...Good lord this is a great poem! After reading the paragraph about it, and then reading the poem itself I can really tell that this poem is connected to some sorrow and the emotions can be easily felt. Having a deep interest in music, I know that being able to write something that can sway the emotions of an audience is effective. Nice job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05745492847091900048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6793096211167766623.post-87998744167251534202013-01-16T12:47:17.300-08:002013-01-16T12:47:17.300-08:00Well I really like the fact that you gave the poem...Well I really like the fact that you gave the poem an AA BB ryme pattern, I don't think I could do that in poetry. I also like the stanza about how his family is nasty because of his little sister. You used the verb capsize which I think worked well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468859110221749363noreply@blogger.com