When composing my poem I first thought of who I was going to write about. I chose one of my best friends Sophia. Next, I started brainstorming and wrote out all my ideas. Once I was done thinking of ideas and topics I then picked which ideas I was going to use in my poem. Then I began to write my poem. I was most surprised by once I completed writing the first two lines, all the other lines seemed to come. The challenge for me was just trying to start out the beginning and what I was going to title my poem. I think my poem turned out better then what I was originally planing.
The Wise Friend
Wisdom
is a treasure,
You
better believe it.
Only
those named Sophia,
Are
lucky to see it.
With her
wise calming words,
She will
whisk you away.
Her crystal
blue eyes light up about the day,
She will
help others see life in a whole new way.
Her
blonde hair was just like Rapunzel’s,
It
flowed in the wind but always tied up like a pretzel.
A giving heart so big,
Even a
kingdom wouldn’t fill it.
She
sings a sweet melody in Carnegie Hall,
Along
with the birds who sing along.
Put
yourself first I would tell her,
You’re
personality is stellar.
First off that is awesome of you to do all that volunteer work! I was also thinking about Social work for my degree as well!
ReplyDeleteAnd your poem was good! I loved all the metaphors and similes you used! Good Job!
-Jenna
Emily, I loved your poem. Good friends are hard to come by, so it's always nice to have one you feel that way about! I also would have loved to see you in the hot dog suit!
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