My process for composing a poem was very important. The challenges that I have found was remembering all the stuff about the person I was writing a poem about. Also, what took the most time was composing my ideas on paper. Some challenges that I faced where how hard it is to write a poem. My poem did turned out the way that I wanted. This turned out the way that I wanted because my thought and ideas were in there and ideas just coming to me.
Mitchell Marotti
English1110.03 Tuesdays and Thursdays
Mr. Lohre
15 January 2013
Coach
O
Coach
O is one of the best
The
Wolves’ football team put him to the test
The
overtime win at Oak Hall
Is
one that I will never forget
A
man so dedicated and competitive on the field
Sometimes
it is hard for him to yield
He
coaches because he loves the game
Without
him it would not have been the same
Always
pushing us to do our best
The
Wolves just had to do the rest
Training
and practicing everyday
Coach
O always had to have his way
And
had us play every play
Like
it was your last if you can
Because
nobody walks except
Coach
O and the postman
Although
playing for coach O had to end
I
would do it all over again
The
best part was when we won
Because
this made it very fun
Hi I'm Jake Gabbert. It sounds like a really interesting family. Game days must be really fun for you. It is hard to write poems, especially since we are hardly ever asked to write them.
ReplyDeleteHi Mitchell I'm Derek Purdie. Your father's job sounds really interesting, it's something I'd love to do. I like your poem, it flows well and has good structure.
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